The Man in the Black Suit
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man that fukn sucks i wanted to watch this grrrrrrrrr ur mum is a hoe WMG
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@TheAllTimeGreatest1 hmmm. well pay attention to the story! The man has died and his granddaughter is reading his diary.
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This sucked more dick than Elton John on Valentines Day
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What the FUCK....Where's Gandalf??
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Dude I imagined the Black suit man to be a complete 180 from what I see here.
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Pretty good I guess. I mean you guys aren't the best actors. Props for the LOTR music though!
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@yonapaloma That doesn't make it immune to constructive criticism. I saw potential, and so I elected to point out what needed work. I'm sorry if I offended you.
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i find this a disgrace :(
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that chick in the beginning has gat a faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat ass, hips and thighs. nice ;)
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All in all, it wasn't bad for a quick little project on no budget done in one afternoon. It kept me mildly entertained(although maybe not for the reasons you expected) and it had a few believable and sincere moments. As I said at the start, I especially liked the opening and closing narration. Whoever that girl is, she was damn good at her role. Just remember the things I said and take them into account the next time you make a film, and I bet you guys will do something great. Good luck. =)
Also: The costumes. The only one that was believable for the period was Gary's mother. The Man In The Black Suit MIGHT have been believable if you ditched the sunglasses, and you could handwave it by saying that he's supernatural, but why go through the trouble and leave holes in the story? Just ditch the glasses. The biggest offender in the costumes department was Gary's father, who looked more like a student at ITT Tech rather than anything a man in the early 20th century would look like.
ometta7 6 months ago
@ometta7 well, you took this ery seriously for a school project made in about 5 days total.
yonapaloma 2 months ago in playlist Uploaded videos