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Uploaded by on Oct 14, 2009

hey guys so i quit my series, because none of you entered the competition. Sorry. But this is my FIRST EVER one-shot, so comment if you like it, comment if you don't like it. Send it to your friends and see if they like it! I dont care just comment.
loll here it is!

Joe's POV
I was so excited. I couldn't wait to tell Demi. Demi has been my girlfriend of 2 years, and about a month ago we moved in together. Everything seemed so perfect right now. I just got accepted to Harvard University. Demi and I both applied for that college, but suprisingly, Demi didn't get accepted. I didn't want to tell her the bad news, but I know I should. I pulled on the doornob of my house and walked in.
"Demi? I'm back" I yelled as i closed the door behind me. "Demi?" I shouted again. Still nothing. I took my jacket off and roamed the house looking for her. When I finally reached the exposed bedroom, I thought I heard a soft whimper. I continued to walk, but I stopped at the bathroom. From under the door, I could see that the light was on, so I pushed my way in. Then I saw what I never expected to see. Demi was on the floor against the wall, hugging her knees. I couldn't see her face, but her quivering back told me that she was crying. I began to get worried.
"Dem, whats wrong?" I asked still standing in the doorway. She was holding something in her hand, but I couldn't see what it was.
"Please...." and she whispered something I couldn't hear. I took a few steps toward her, then stopped when I arrived at her front, looking down at her.
"Demi, baby, are you okay?" I asked a little scared. I had never seen her like this before. "Please don't-" she paused and gasped for breath, then continued,
"Don't l-leave me. P-promise me you won't. Please." Her voice was just barely audible, muffled because her head was still between her knees.
"Why would I do that?" She gripped the object in her palm tighter, and looked up at me. When I saw her face, I was shocked. She had clearly been crying for hours. Her eyes were Red and her cheeks were flushed. She had black streak running down the side of her face, I'm guessing from her eyeliner. She raised her empty hand and stroked the tears off her face. I crouched down infront of her,and placed one hand on her shoulder, ready to hear what she had to say. She looked my directly in the eyes, the down at her hand. I didn't realize that she had already exposed the object to me. "I-im pregnant." she stated.

what do you think is going to happen?
1. Will Joe leave her?
2. Will they keep it?
3. Do you like it?? Should I post another one?
4. What do YOU want to happen?
15 + comments for the next 1!
(this is the only one i'll charge comments for.)

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  • Awesome storyy. :D Where do u get picture at 0:07??

  • @ashikinharidan

    Demi's twitpic a long while back..

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  • 1 i don´t know but i hope he doesn´t

    2 yes they have to keep it

    3 yes and yes!!

    4 maybe the both can go to harward and have the baby(idk how xD)

  • its kinda cool cuz they are going out now love the song + story

  • OMG! dont quit ittt yooo!! OMGG! i can be your co-writer!! i am willing to write with you!! PLEASE!! i really want more of hard to find!! it was like the best series i have everrrr read !! and ive read thousands of them!! PWEASE!! please message me if u are willing to co-write with me!!! PLEASE!! =/

  • awesome i so loved it

  • Awesome. :)

  • omg i love it already

  • Awesome

    Please post the next one!!

  • This is good

    Next one plz

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