Television Pitch
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Three words: Really Great!
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Lets cut to the chase.thats ironic.
:D
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Who's the cute, Korean girl?
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Kid Cop Sounds like something CBS would have in 1996. You two have good rapport.
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Very nice dude.
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3:07 "I'm blown..." (lrn2whtbalance)
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Rack zoom a bit more. That'll help with my gag reflex.
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Fast dialogue is great when your are Sorkin. Story archs are better when you aren't Sorkin.
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I would personally like to see a medical mermaid melodrama.
BoschParade 1 year ago 8
Hey Paul Thomas, thanks for signing in under two different accounts to bash this video. Also, if you plan on criticizing make sure that you do it right. A story arc is "a term in episodic storytelling media, such as television, that refers to a continuing storyline." An arch is a structure that spans a space while supporting weight. That's alright though, you're videos are hilarious and you were in a promo with NPH so you have the right to be youtube police. Be on the lookout for tv pitch 2.
BanowskyOGs 1 year ago 4