SWC Intro?

I made this yesterday as a possible intro to the machinima. I'm posting it here to get any suggestions or critical analysis on it. Keep in mind I can't hack so the camera views on filmed objects can't be changed too much from what it is.

I did get one introduction video earlier on but it was using only game video made for the subspace emissary, I didn't want only that stuff for an intro if at all.

The song is the first 48 seconds of Abandoned Agony by Bhargov Sosale on freesoundtrack's profile. I also modified the pitch in the song using audacity.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• 02
• SWC
• LotDR
• Intro

[DarkPrime120]

The running by the box is dumb but everything else is great

[Sekunri]

The box thing will make sense later on. Its kind of a joke with how in the Metal Gear games people would walk by the random box without thinking anything of it.

[Hrhughes1994]

I think the whole thing should just be my characters...

it would be 5569964x more epic xDDD

[Sekunri]

Lol, might be a bit shorter though.

[Sekunri]

Glad you like it ^_^

[brickwall34]

Very nice, at the end you should have it sort of just fade to black, but it was nice. not too over the top, sort of just a relaxed feeling

[Sekunri]

It will fade to black when in the actual machinima.

[riku1902]

abandon agony?form freesoundtrack.

i used it on my video it works though

[bigpapas12]

i like it!!!!!!!!

[39par]

Nice

[Zmazh101]

Video was good, but the music seemed to lack...idk...pizzazz? It may be fine though, depending on the mood of your machinima.

One thing with the editing; there are a few places that seem to be at a stand still for too long. Like, for example, when link does his spin attack he stands there for like half a second and begins the attack. But I think if you begin the clip right as he is in full spin, it would run together with the rest of the clips smoother. It's no big deal though.

[pixelgeekproductions]

wow its great but gasp how could you not put ness in it!

[Scooter102089]

looks good, man. yoshi and mario'll be done before the end of tonight

[KingKiwi2008]

Kool! btw, is the show going to be a comedy series or serious?

[HiZzLifE]

I like it. Nice job.