So You Think You Can Rap Contest - Generationz Crew

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Lyrics:

Tonzo' :
I've took notes from all the professionals and been to the seminars
Wrote bars from hell & back yet no ones feeling my repertoire
We try to open eyes with all the bars we're portraying
As the game crumbles artists living lives of the Haitians
I'm displaying through my heart and the crowd I'm engaging
But there's no middle ground to find within this techno invasion
And the wise man knows that there's no freedom of speech
This propaganda leech gives me inspiration to teach
But parents think that our domain is where the hideous live
They treat us like we bed intruders cause they hiding they kids
I guess they just don't know better
Cause on t.v. rap artists shown as chains and low sweaters
When somethings that flaunted even they become prospects
To there own nonsense and material objects
A bomb couldn't make a deeper hole in this long depth
God said "one will deceive you" but many help in the process

Lil'a :

Lyrical rappers who they ridicule, Treat us like we so minuscule
But our rhyming deeper than the ocean you're just a kiddie-pool
It's pitiful, not many real rappers are left in this
While these whack MC's claim lyricism is irrelevant
Whatever happened to rapping with meaning and passion
Now a days all these rappers care about is rolling some cash in
Wish I was in the decade of the one and only golden age
Of real rap not what these mainstream rappers portray
But old schools at it's end so we try to rewind it
But these whack MC's got the whole world blinded
So let's clear there vision give real rappers recognition
For staying true to the game and putting heart in lyricism

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[cosmonaught1919]

its got potential, but i feel like you guys overuse one rhyme scheme too much. work on your sense of beat and your flow, and this could seriously go somewhere though. keep growing and let your flow just kind of evolve, thats the way to be

[RappinBoyz]

@cosmonaught1919 Thanks man, but you haven't heard our full talent from this song, I'll send u a link to our newest song 1ce it gets recorded

[isthatchuck]

Weak 1 syllable rhyme patterns, don't say rappers are whack, when you are the epitome of whack. You have too many likes for nothing, this is a whack contest, for whack cunts... oh... like you.

[RappinBoyz]

@isthatchuck Lol we did 1 syllable rhymes cuz the beat we had to use, Plus I heard your songs and you have NO room to talk. If you're good enough, win this contest. Enough said.

[JongchunKim]

@RappinBoyz wtf? how does the beat stop you from doing a double syllable rhyme schemes? More like you were too lazy and non-lyrical to do it

[RappinBoyz]

@JongchunKim I didn't mean to say that's why we didn't use 1 syllable rhymes cuz of that, I meant to say that's why it's so slow. This isn't our full potential by a long shot, I'll admit we're a group that doesn't have patients so we wanted to post an entry ASAP which is why it's not our best. You'll see soon, and if you don't that's fine too.

[defected1234]

Yall can rap guys !

[SuperBaconFTW]

can´t blame the guys for that boring beat they had to use.

this is def. one of the better entrys.

[iiMahReex3]

they'll end up succesful.

[emrblaze]

aye rappinboyz you dont have to explain why you did this how you did it either they like it or not n dont ever say you didnt do ya best you put everything into every verse n it will come out hot.I actually like this n yeah i can spit.

[cosmonaught1919]

not that i claim to be perfect or anything - anyone claiming to have perfect flow is just ignorant, the only direction you can ever go is up