Original Song 'Eleanor'

Hey guys,
This is me singing a song that i wrote called 'Eleanor' and this girl is a real girl and everything in this song did happen. I know it might be hard to understand what actually happened from my lyrics because there was a lot to fit into the song, but to cut it a little short, i was friends with her and someone else didn't like that so much and tried to take her away from me. She made up some lies about me and now her and this other girl are close friends and i'm completely ignored. So maybe the lyrics make more sense now.
I started this song last October when most of this happened and totally forgot about it. While writing another song, i found the half written lyrics again and finished it off. I hope you like it.
As always, as much as i wish i played ain instrument, i don't, so this is just me singing the melody of my song. And also, please let me know what you think. Any comment, good or bad, means a lot to me because it shows that you've taken the time to let me know your thoughts and that means a lot to me. And i hope you enjoy this.

ELEANOR

I recall our first day so clearly.
You were so very glad to see me,
But that was when we first met,
You easily forget.
Yeah.
I felt in you I had found a friend,
I guess betraying is the new trend,
You said that you couldn't stand her,
And now you're always together.

Chorus:
Don't act like you're so innocent,
I made sure you knew her intent.
Don't say I'm the one to blame,
You fell for her nasty game,
To steal you was always her aim.
She despises me,
Lies to me,
And now you are doing the same.

I told you everything she'd done to me,
You said I needed to get angry,
You told me I should be strong,
And tell her she was wrong.
Yeah.
You laughed and said that you would hit her,
You told me I was so much better.
But now she's gone and changed your mind,
And you have left me far behind.

Chorus:
Don't act like you're so innocent,
I made sure you knew her intent.
Don't say I'm the one to blame,
You fell for her nasty game,
To steal you was always her aim.
She despises me,
Lies to me,
And now you are doing the same.

Bridge:
For god's sake,
You're so fake,
You want to feel like you belong,
So you tell yourself I have done wrong.
But I think you're hiding behind a mask so no one's able,
To tell you once felt so vulnerable.

Chorus:
Don't act like you're so innocent,
So innocent.
I made sure you knew her intent.
Please don't say I'm the one to blame,
You fell for her nasty game,
To steal you was always her aim.
She despises me,
Lies to me,
She excludes me,
She's rude to me,
Yeah
She hates me,
Frustrates me,
And now you are doing the same.

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[xAngelPromisex]

@Tr33flow3r Aw thank you :) I don't think its the best of my originals though ;) ahha ;) Then again im SO picky about them. Thank you for commenting :)

xx

[Tr33flow3r]

Its sad that its true, but its good. I like it ; )

[xAngelPromisex]

ahah it's cool, you don't have to compare the two because they were uploaded at the same time :P I wrote this one a long time ago :P Just finished off the lyrics recently :P Thanks :) And i'm sorry about your best friend :(

xx

[nickjonaslover257]

personally, i like this one better than losing you. but theyre both really good. This sounds like exactly what happened to my best friend. its amazing renny :)

[xAngelPromisex]

Yay thank you :)

I'm glad you love the song :D

xx

[xMisteryDreamsx]

So, Ren, i write a comment now :P

I LOVE THIS SONG! Really i love it so much ;D

xx