[Verse1]
The Nile flows softly like your hair stroke my soul
The foams shine in peace like your whites wink to me
And I tried to build a bridge along the stream
In your rain all I need is to hear you invite me
Hope to see you today
[Chorus]
When I see you across the Nile
I'm burning for you
When you're not around
I cry in, flames are rising higher
I want to see you
And all the waves are growing higher
I'm drowned inside your love
And I'm fallen again
Please show up again
And cease the fire
[Verse2]
The Nile takes me when your face on my soul
Drifting away through your eyes piercing me
And I tried to breathe in the circle of dreams
In your maelstrom all I need is your hands to hold me
Stop this cold war today
[Repeat Chorus]
I'm fallen in Nile again
Please show up today
And cease the fire
Amazing song! Nice to hear such song. It brings the whisper of magic...
MagicLadyOfLabyrinth 1 year ago
oh so beautiful!! I agree with Yami. you need to work on a little on your vocals. so being an Egyptian, you get extra kudos :D:D:D:D keep up the good work my friend :)
EcHeLoN5242 1 year ago
I like the music and i love the lyrics! But, i think the vocals could use some work. With some more practice this could be an amazing song! Check out some of my stuff too!
YamiMusic123 1 year ago