I Feel Alive (original)

I don't really have much to say about this other than the fact that I wrote it and messed up a little. My voice seems a little off today, too... Oh well.

Sometimes I stop when I'm walking outside
And close my eyes,
Just feeling for the wind on my skin
To make me alive.

To make me alive,
To make me alive.

Sometimes I think about thinking of thoughts
And waste my time.
Sometimes I want -- is it a want or a wish? --
That I could find

Another mind
To make me alive.

I want to feel again,
I want to breathe.
I want to sing again,
Just to believe.

Sometimes I cry, but I cry in the rain
Where no one sees.
Just standing there, commiserating,
Dark clouds and me.

It makes me alive,
It makes me alive.

Sometimes I fly places no one would look
To free myself.
I perch above everyone down below
And on this shelf

I feel alive,
I feel alive.

I want to feel again,
I want to breathe.
I want to sing again,
Let me believe.

I want to feel once more
My hand upon your skin.
The softest touch, oh, but to see
Your smile again...

And I never knew how much you meant
Until you left me here alone and so confused
And rain will fall freely from my eyes,
From my eyes...

Sometimes I dream when I'm wide awake,
And it's you I see.
If this is false, I don't want to be true.
It's you and me.

It makes me alive,
You make me alive.
I feel alive,
Let's feel alive.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Feel
• Alive
• original
• acoustic
• guitar
• song
• lyrics
• solo
• music

[777DarkLink777]

@Drewpoooo Thanks! Even though I got a little pitchy on "eyes," it really is the climax of the song. For that reason, it can only be there once. Thanks so much for your comment, though! I'm proud of this, and I'm glad other people seem to like it, too.

[Drewpoooo]

Yeah legit it was great! the 4:05 to 4:32 was my favorite part so maybe put that in there more than once idk great writing tho!

[777DarkLink777]

@CoolJohnDog Really? Thanks a lot! :D

[CoolJohnDog]

That was really good! Like legit, no joke, that was awesome.