An interesting analogy. However, the words are a bit draggy, some of which could be omitted though. Overall, its a pretty good effort! Well done, gals!
Although the synopsis at the beginning was a drag, the background music has helped to smooth the whole atmosphere and build up audience's anticipation. To me, it was a relatively good strategy to entice me to follow on with the video. The plot may seem to be simple but it is embedded with meaningful message on partnership. The illustration is straightforward, thus easy to understand. It has indeed left a great impression in me! Good job, girls!
While the plot seems a little draggy, the fariy tale like sotry was interesting enough and it brought out the essence of commitment in a partnership and the ill effects of neglect, that if overlooked, will eventually spiral out of control. Thanks for the video!
I initially felt that the words were quite draggy and it didnt' really left much of an impression in me. However, seeing the story did help to depict the situation better. Good effort girls! :)
At 1st video was draggy & didnt catch my attn.Mid scene,i started to get the gist.Finally,the ending & conclusion made me realise how impt a partnership is.This shows that in a cooperation,things may not go how 1 expects things to turn out,but look on the bright side,there's always a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.TRUST cannot be made without 1st convincing.These girls have assured & given me hope that they're responsible & worthy of our trust in any future partnerships.Good job girls!
An interesting analogy. However, the words are a bit draggy, some of which could be omitted though. Overall, its a pretty good effort! Well done, gals!
pym83 4 years ago
Although the synopsis at the beginning was a drag, the background music has helped to smooth the whole atmosphere and build up audience's anticipation. To me, it was a relatively good strategy to entice me to follow on with the video. The plot may seem to be simple but it is embedded with meaningful message on partnership. The illustration is straightforward, thus easy to understand. It has indeed left a great impression in me! Good job, girls!
jesstwq 4 years ago
While the plot seems a little draggy, the fariy tale like sotry was interesting enough and it brought out the essence of commitment in a partnership and the ill effects of neglect, that if overlooked, will eventually spiral out of control. Thanks for the video!
limsy86 4 years ago
I initially felt that the words were quite draggy and it didnt' really left much of an impression in me. However, seeing the story did help to depict the situation better. Good effort girls! :)
brokenchainz 4 years ago
At 1st video was draggy & didnt catch my attn.Mid scene,i started to get the gist.Finally,the ending & conclusion made me realise how impt a partnership is.This shows that in a cooperation,things may not go how 1 expects things to turn out,but look on the bright side,there's always a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow.TRUST cannot be made without 1st convincing.These girls have assured & given me hope that they're responsible & worthy of our trust in any future partnerships.Good job girls!
paulchoo 4 years ago