This song has like 3 parts and it's very chaotic. I don't know what kind of genre you're trying to deliver to the listener. It's like... I dunno. Chaos only usually works for darkstep drum n bass and psy trance. Pretty good for a beginner, and MUCH better than I sounded when I first started. Just keep in mind you want structure and you want to hook us and pull us through a journey. Not the best. Not the worst, either. Very very good for your skill. Keep up the good work, and I'll critique more!
This song is quite cute. It was... Alright to say the most. I'm giving it my honest opinion as of now... It didn't have any bass. It felt a little empty, but the chords were complex and fun. The percs disappeared for a moment there. Okay just hit a complete change up.. Love the harsh notes. Okay I hear... A build up... CHANGE that snare. Not good at all or add some reverb. This song is so EMPTY without percs. Gotta have those hats, kick, and snare. I love your fun patterns, BUT....
@AmeniphusX Can you just critique my music too? Lol.. specially the Blue Beam .. Thanks :)
Luckzzz 1 year ago
fail at 23.but not that im better i suck
xzisten123 1 year ago
Muy fresca y clara....coooooool..
jetamez 3 years ago
very good. wow
jennsljsher 3 years ago
i love it....great job!!!
VincentChick87 3 years ago
This song has like 3 parts and it's very chaotic. I don't know what kind of genre you're trying to deliver to the listener. It's like... I dunno. Chaos only usually works for darkstep drum n bass and psy trance. Pretty good for a beginner, and MUCH better than I sounded when I first started. Just keep in mind you want structure and you want to hook us and pull us through a journey. Not the best. Not the worst, either. Very very good for your skill. Keep up the good work, and I'll critique more!
AmeniphusX 3 years ago 2
This song is quite cute. It was... Alright to say the most. I'm giving it my honest opinion as of now... It didn't have any bass. It felt a little empty, but the chords were complex and fun. The percs disappeared for a moment there. Okay just hit a complete change up.. Love the harsh notes. Okay I hear... A build up... CHANGE that snare. Not good at all or add some reverb. This song is so EMPTY without percs. Gotta have those hats, kick, and snare. I love your fun patterns, BUT....
AmeniphusX 3 years ago
Very good beat, ty
Juleighbabe 3 years ago
love the sounds and haow it flows
JHL05 3 years ago
love it <333
LittlePunk7 3 years ago