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Uploaded by Suthrngurl428 on Apr 13, 2009
Persuasive Speech on Drug Abuse
Education
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to be honest.. there were many problems with this...
her delivery seems lacking some spunk.... this could easily be fixed by being more prepared
eye contact was lacking some... again this is fixed by preparation
and then when she speaks about god... she is not being considerate about her audience
you never begin a speech by saying... "Today i am going to talk about"
MRtoker2007 10 months ago
Clear and calm and was not nervous. Good conclusion. for length of speech you spent to long on the intro. Should not ask in a class setting who has been effected by drug abuse. good job!
lancerboy17 1 year ago
Good job
kayla101b 1 year ago
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to be honest.. there were many problems with this...
her delivery seems lacking some spunk.... this could easily be fixed by being more prepared
eye contact was lacking some... again this is fixed by preparation
and then when she speaks about god... she is not being considerate about her audience
you never begin a speech by saying... "Today i am going to talk about"
MRtoker2007 10 months ago
Clear and calm and was not nervous. Good conclusion. for length of speech you spent to long on the intro. Should not ask in a class setting who has been effected by drug abuse. good job!
lancerboy17 1 year ago
Good job
kayla101b 1 year ago