Escape Rough

Forgot how much fun it is to edit at 1 am. No, seriously. But now I'm tired, so I'm calling it good for the first rough edit.
Feedback would be awesome, two things to note. You guys might not like the jump-ish cut with the first door encounter, if that bothers you a lot be sure to mention it. If it doesn't seem like a problem or a small one, that would make me happy. ;) I kind-of like it, but who knows what you'll think. The other thinggggg is the pan at the end. I don't think I like that, but I figured I'd leave it in for you all to ponder. And yes, I do realize the door into the garden is really bad. Believe me, I tried to make it look decent, but it just wasn't happening. I deviated from the storyboard for the ending, comments on that too please. Plus timing. Or you could just not comment at all. Whatever you want. I'm going to sleep now.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• visual
• literacy
• slideshow
• plot
• school
• project
• escape
• sight
• unscene

[queenofamerica]

Is the guy from your class?

I liked it a lot overall. The jump-ish thing didn't bother me, and neither did the door into the garden, I thought it was pretty good. The only thing that bothered me is the way you returned color to the guy. I'm not a fan. But I'm not sure of a better way to do it. Can you like fade it in over the whole face?

Also I would fade out the audio at the end. But you were probably going to do that anyway.