Hi everyone! Here's a new original for you. While elements of it are autobiographical, it is not really written for anyone in particular. But I bet we've all been in situations like this. Hope it does something for you.
Keep your head up, friends!
~ Elliott
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"MY GETAWAY"
VERSE 1:
I'm confused now honey, help me get it straight,
You said your girlfriends kept you out this late.
They had a situation only you could fix,
I got a real bad feeling 'bout their bag of tricks.
VERSE 2:
It's the same old story, like a haunting dream,
You come home drunker than a football team.
But it's the end-game baby, and its down to this,
I need a month-long session with my therapist.
CHORUS 1:
Because we're fighting, fighting, can't we stop?
Are you dealing me, dealing me off the top?
You're a pretty buttercup ah but I think you set me up for a fall.
I don't know, don't know what you want,
Is it me? Is it him? Should I be here or gone?
And while you're thinking what to say I'm gonna' make my get-away from it all.
VERSE 3:
I know an old palm reader and she read my hand,
She made a twisted face, said "Boy, now understand,
I see a big storm brewing underneath the shine,
The water's rising fast, there goes your plimsoll line".
VERSE 4:
I'd rather box with Ali, get a busted lip,
Than be the captain on this sinking ship.
We hit an iceburg bigger than an asteroid,
And that's the one thing girl I wanted to avoid.
CHORUS 2:
I can feel, I can feel what my hands can touch,
I believe, I believe maybe a bit too much.
But there's a limit and beyond it there ain't nothing but the slam of a door.
I'm in love, I'm in love, but it hurts to be,
Too damn in love with a girl who ain't in love for me.
It doesn't matter what you say because I just ain't gonna' take anymore.
(copyright E. Kimmel, 2010)
waouh it's really good ! bravo !!!! 5*
lilicox84 1 year ago
@lilicox84 Awesome! So glad you liked it. Thanks for your comment and rating. :)
zerobio 1 year ago
It´s great to listen to that refreshing "Zerobio" style with your well crafted lyrics and soared by that great lead guitar here, endless stars!
Alice
Alicia5028 1 year ago
@Alicia5028 Awesome! So happy to hear that you liked it! Please keep on coming back, friend.
~ Elliott
zerobio 1 year ago
Awesome singing (and harmonies), awesome song! What a great rocker!
orionedwin 1 year ago
@orionedwin Hey Edwin, nice to see you back. How are you doing? Thank you for coming by and letting me know your opinion. Means a lot to me coming from a fellow rocker from Ottawa. :)
zerobio 1 year ago