IN SEARCH OF THE HOLY SPIRIT

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Uploaded by on May 12, 2008

Directed/Edited by ThinkMorePink
http://www.youtube.com/user/thinkmorepink

Guest Starring: The Great Largo64
http://www.youtube.com/user/Largo64

Poem and script written by: David Randall Curtis

Goddess at the start of the video: TheShan

IN SEARCH OF THE HOLY SPIRIT

I listened at the reading
as he conned the audience
with self-righteous
politically correct poetry.

Then I confronted him.

"You seem to have
all the answers
- maybe you should
carve your poems
into stone tablets
for us philistines."

He delicately sipped
his decaffeinated espresso
and replied,

"I've heard your
self-pitying monologues
on relationships and addictions
- perhaps you should
just nail yourself to a cross
and get it over with."

After a long conversation
we found much in common
and became friends.

Now we're looking
for one more person
so we can form
a Trinity.

(David Randall Curtis)

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  • ... powerful, pointed and fun.

    Your craft is truely developed.

  • ASAngelo: I thank you and Mone thanks you :p

    Actually, if you look at the last vid I did--the fellatio collab--I am looking really developed there--so to speak :p

  • LMAO! That was brilliant. Largo really "nailed" that performance.

  • Aegialeus: I shamelessly try to copy the way he delivers his lines here when I do this at spoken word readings... :P

Top Comments

  • I'm the one with the coffee, but not the writer of this poem. I would mock god, but in this case I didn't. As Shannon announced at the beginning of this video, it's a poem by David Randall Curtis. It's about the ego of a poet. It just takes a word to trigger you, though, doesn't it, Glenn. Of course, we can't see you now. Has that vein in your head popped yet from all the hate? Or are you waiting for your eyeballs to explode first?

  • Good for you, asshole. You got to spew at me again even though blocked. As for my remarks to Glenn, perhaps you didn't see any of the hate-filled videos of his as GlennReb, Screaming vitriol and literally getting red in the face. What I said to him was merely an observation of what I actually saw. You won't spit on my grave. When I die I am going to medical school! I'll be worth more dead than you ever will be alive.

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  • I'll take a peek. Winkers.

  • intelligent: Ha ha... I just saw this... I hate to admit it - but I think Agent Smith is one cool bad ass... :P

  • Oh this is just so excellent!

  • I agree please write "I largo64" on back of crisp new $100 bill and send to windham666

  • erkd1: I'd trust Largo over God any day. Largo has never damned me to Hell (though he might if I keep bugging him for advice on poetry :p )

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