your topic is not a very great one since the majority of the population already agrees with the point you are trying to make.. so who are you persuading? and on top of that your facts just aren't there.. you've failed to make the separation between use and abuse which makes all the difference as most of your points are coming from ABUSE and not USE even though you used "use" the majority of the time
your topic is not a very great one since the majority of the population already agrees with the point you are trying to make.. so who are you persuading? and on top of that your facts just aren't there.. you've failed to make the separation between use and abuse which makes all the difference as most of your points are coming from ABUSE and not USE even though you used "use" the majority of the time
KyleP2009 1 year ago