I Have Kept The Faith

Soldier's song to his widow.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Religious
• Music

[TomySky]

The danger of making a piece fit a song is that it will naturally be too long. This film is no different. If you had edited the song down to fit your film it would have worked much better.

I think your idea would have come across better had you used a song about war rather than spiritual warfare, unless you had gone the direction of a martyr. That would have worked as well.

A few less than ideal technical issues, but overall well framed and shot.

Keep working at this great art. -Luke

[ghwdzh]

Thanks for the feedback Luke. I wish more people would give constructive criticism. I did shorten the music by one whole verse to fit the music into the required 3:00 minute criteria. The song is supposed to be written by a soldier to his wife about what he has learned on the battlefield, that being that all battles are spiritual warfare. I know the technical issues but I only had 5.5 hours to complete this video. Thanks again.

Tim

[TomySky]

Tim, I wish more people gave feedback too, which is one of the main reasons I spent so much time working through all the videos. I'm so glad my feedback was helpful.

I totally understand the time constraints. I merely want to provide some ideas for improvement in future productions.

I'm here to help in whatever way I can. -Luke

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