Dramatic Monologue from Fences!
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Hey this was good, you managed to get some nice emotion in your voice. I'd suggest working on your tone a bit so that it isn't the same all the way through otherwise it starts to sound a bit whiny. You could maybe start small with the emotion and then build it up.
Experiment with pace as well- you can afford to eliminate some of the pauses and make some sentences run a bit faster.
Nice start though!
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Need to work on your accent
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your facial expressions and mannerisms were good but your eyes were a bit dead try to convey the emotion to them and it will be excellent
peanutbuttercup992 1 year ago
@peanutbuttercup992 thankss! yeah I was reading off a script so my eye contact was not the best.. I'm going to be posting up more soon so pleaseee keep coming with the feedback, thank you!
Samira11291 1 year ago