Dramatic Monologue from Fences!

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Uploaded by on Jun 7, 2010

My first monologue from the play Fences. Enjoyyy and let me know what you think =)

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  • your facial expressions and mannerisms were good but your eyes were a bit dead try to convey the emotion to them and it will be excellent

  • @peanutbuttercup992 thankss! yeah I was reading off a script so my eye contact was not the best.. I'm going to be posting up more soon so pleaseee keep coming with the feedback, thank you!

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  • Hey this was good, you managed to get some nice emotion in your voice. I'd suggest working on your tone a bit so that it isn't the same all the way through otherwise it starts to sound a bit whiny. You could maybe start small with the emotion and then build it up.

    Experiment with pace as well- you can afford to eliminate some of the pauses and make some sentences run a bit faster.

    Nice start though!

  • Need to work on your accent

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