Uploaded by Bboy3RMusic on Jan 28, 2012
I had to write down my thoughts on paper...so I did...Thanks to George Watsky, Shane Koyczan and bball1989 for giving me inspiration.
Girls...no... women, you can do so much more
Guys, instead of looking at her shirt, start looking at her core,
At her body, you see 1%,
In her eyes, you see 2%
In her heart is the 107% in which angels have sent
There's no reason for boys to overlook their insecurities in order to "get some"
If you wanna become a man, learn to treat a woman like if both of you were together, you would become one
Treat women like they're princesses and beauty is where they're from
They deserve to be treated above and beyond, for one day, they may carry your son
Now how can I know about this you ask?
I look like just some Asian boy stuck on writing drafts
Look, just because I stay at home a lot doesn't mean my life's boring,
It means I focus on reaching oput, while being trapped in my own sets of flowing stories....
Listen....
I don't believe that I was born to be a king
But I do know that I was raised in the arms of a queen who's married to a king
And if I'm destined to be a prince then I will try and be the best one I can be
I was taught enough to understand what goes on in this world
The people who have still ceased to understand that they can't just live in their own world
Many forget about the one word...what's it called?
LOVE....
They forget and replace it with the word called
LUST....
It makes me wonder whatever happened to PROMISE & TRUST
Whatever happened to friendship before relationship?
No....whatever happened to both? I guess they fell off that ship just becoming friend and relation
Instead, boys aim to be after just the outside
Like a simple tag and go, not even willing to ride the tide
Love is just a word now, used in a question including "You lied" with it
Like love is just physical instead of having the feeling of happiness accompanying it
I don't know about you all but I know what a woman should be treated like
I know what actual love is
Love is the feeling you get where you want to rip the clouds from the sky and put them in a machine
Love makes you want to mix the clouds by hand so you can feel what you're putting in it
You want to create cotton candy clouds and give it to the person and people you love and say,
"Here, I made it for you :)"
The feeling makes you want to take the stars in the night sky and kill them then,
Turn the sky into firework of supernovas creating shades from purple to yellowing spelling out the name of the people you care about
It makes you want to take the burning depths of hell and turn the Devil's domain into ice
It makes you feel like... you've become your mother
Love makes you want to do everything in your power to protect the ones you care about
Like they're your cubs...and you're the momma
Like you're King Leonitus of the 300 Spartans and you won't give up until you're finished
L.O.V.E. isn't meant to be a game of just tag it and quit it
And calling a girl ugly won't boost your popularity one bit
I'm on a train
Where does this train go?
It brings me to the land of Care
Where people won't stop and stare for the simplest mistakes
In that land, women are considered beautiful even without make-up
Where the feeling of being loved for the right reasons won't have to be earned, but accepted right away
Some women might've just experienced too much to not feel pretty or trust guys anymore
I want to let you all know,
There are guys who aim to treat a princess right
Who want to make your sunrises and sunsets sustain as a never-ending cycle of happiness
Who won't say I love you just to take advantage of you
But who actually mean it
Ladies, women, girls, every single one of you are beautiful
Without make-up, thinking you look your worst, is actually the best feeling a nice guy could get knowing you trust him enough to just hang out with him in your pajamas
And yes I said nice guys
We exist.
We're here.
Just listen.
And just remember, YOU ARE ALL BEAUTIFUL, no matter what circumstances.
(The lines not written down were improvised during the speech)
Thank you for listening.
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Dude you seriously have an awesome message! Keep up the good work.
Weaponsgenius 1 month ago
TBH the best way to respect a girl is treat her as if she were a man
leltard 1 month ago
You have some incredible ideas. Keep writing.
PercussionPlease 1 month ago
This was lovely
ibeaunicorn 1 month ago
wow rob, amazing (:
rubberduckygirls77 1 month ago
This is amazing. I loved it. You are amazing.
hannabananaxxoo 1 month ago
thumbs up!
SaudiSparky 1 month ago
aww rob, :')
ABitOfSomethingSweet 1 month ago