Still I love you Original by Diane Hancox

Ok It's alittle crackly.. i think maybe i need to quit smoking :P but any ways I'm looking for some honest critiquing on my lyrics and maybe some advice on the melody. I have written many more songs most of which are in a soul/rNb style so i'll be uploading some of them tomorrow :P

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Still
• I
• love
• you

[iRewel]

Take your shirt off!

[dannymac13]

Ur a loser

[bartmane]

wow, deep lyrics, even without any backup it sounds really good. Wish i could write like you.

[dannymac13]

Thanks Man :D you write music too?

[bartmane]

i've been trying a bit lately, but i seem to be able to write raps much better than rock or alternative. I play guitar and try to sing (nowhere near as well as you)

[dannymac13]

I love you! hah! keep at it any rap can be a rock song just add a few words here and there to make the beat work. You play guitar well hey... now you got a melody.. .. got any vids??

[iRewel]

Quit stalling... and just take your shirt off.

[muahkjl]

You have an amazing voice

[bartmane]

not yet, i don't have a camera.. and i'm not really a youtuber (yet) lol