The shots are composed very well and my only critique would be that you may have been able to trim a few frames here and there, tightening up the individual shots, without losing the deliberate pace. But I enjoyed your work and hope you are still making films.
nice. i like the double false montage alterne. good cinema stuff. the only things that seemed to me a bit off, is that the husband is not really good looking enough.
The shots are composed very well and my only critique would be that you may have been able to trim a few frames here and there, tightening up the individual shots, without losing the deliberate pace. But I enjoyed your work and hope you are still making films.
nodicefilms 3 years ago
beautiful... absolutely beautiful
prolsit 3 years ago
nice work
entertainmentresearc 4 years ago
Great storytelling. I was slowly drawn in by the possibilities. Thanks
nescalante2001 4 years ago
The music helps allot
loftboy3 4 years ago 2
thank you
loftboy3 4 years ago
Thank you for showing what a real you tube video should look like
loftboy3 4 years ago
I Envy your talent
loftboy3 4 years ago
Love it!
bellasanela83 4 years ago
nice. i like the double false montage alterne. good cinema stuff. the only things that seemed to me a bit off, is that the husband is not really good looking enough.
drparallax 4 years ago