Alert icon
We're changing our privacy policy. This stuff matters.  Learn more  Dismiss

No Heaven Without You ; 1, Part 1 ; Jick/Joick

Loading...

Sign in or sign up now!
Alert icon
Upgrade to the latest Flash Player for improved playback performance. Upgrade now or more info.
3,208
Loading...
Alert icon
Sign in or sign up now!
Alert icon

Uploaded by on Oct 25, 2009

Episode One-My Death-
I walked down the vacant streets. I stared at the empty windows, the deserted driveways, the silent houses as I passed. It makes me sigh knowing this was heaven, Well not heaven but purgatory. I don't care what it is I hate it. I hate that I'm stuck here, I hate that I'm dead, I hate that evil man that put me here. I remember it just like it was yesterday, Oh wait, it was. It seems like forever and a day ago that I was walking across that feild at 2 A.M.


It was very late at night, I should have been in bed, that's where my mom thought I was. But like most night, I couldn't fall asleep. I snuck out of my window a lot. For me being just a 16 year old boy I guess I should have been catious, just because in the world that we're in. But at the time there wasn't a worry in my mind, to much was riding against what was actually going to happen to me. I mean I lived in one of the smallest towns I'd ever heard of. In Bloomer, Wisconsin the population barely exceeded 2,000. There had never been a murder there, like ever. One cop was on duty at a time in the WHOLE city. I was a 16 year old boy with testosterone and pretty big muscles, I don't mean to brag, if someone wanted to fight me I wasn't planning to back down . . . except a few people. One of those few people included our newest edition to our old town. Henry Hallen(Hal-in), funny name. But as small as our town was, and since he moved into one of the newly built houses only 2 doors down, every one knew him and my father and him had already met to talk about fertilizer and such. He was huge, easily over 200 pounds. His muscles were 3 times the size of mine.
Something was off about him, ever since I saw him look at me the first time. The way he stared even though he knew I was looking at him, wherever he was from I'm sure that was considered rude. I looked back a few times as I hurried back into the house, Still staring.
But I had checked, before leavin the safety of my own property, to make sure his lights were turned off. They were, If only I had known that that was because he was stalking me, from far enough away that I couldn't hear him walk nor could I see him when I turned around. But now that I think about it I think I knew he was there, I could feel it. The atmospere around me was much more eerie than the other nights I had snuck out to think.
I dismissed the feelings though, maybe because it was so close to halloween, at this point the jack-o-lanterns were out, the fake cobwebs were in the windows, the skeletons hung from the porch ceilings. Halloween was tomorrow night. My death, October 30th, 2008.
I walked across the empty cornfeild. Corn wasn't in season so it was just an empty feild of dirt that led directly to the forest. The forest was the last thing I would ever see around me. As I walked to the edge of the cornfeild I looked back and still saw nothing. I felt as if someone was watching me, but again, I brushed off the feeling. I entered the forest, not knowing at the time that I would never exit.
It was a short hike to the highest elevation in all of the forest, A little mountain if you will. About 200 feet higher in elevation that the rest of Bloomer. At the top of this big hill was a clearing, a little valley I guess. The trees thinned and you could look out over the rest of town, and even the bigger cities, like Milwaukee, though I knew I couldn't see that far. The moon was full, it would be full for halloween, though I wouldn't get to see the moon tomorrow night. As I stared at it now, I felt the need to soak it in. Soak in the midnight breeze, it was freezing here. I felt the need to MAKE the cold air sink into my skin. To embed the smell of the leaves on my brain. I felt the need to do all of these things and it confused me deeply. I was staring up at the moon when he first spoke.
"Nick, a kid as young as yourself shouldn't be out by yourself this late at night." Shivers went down my spine, I turned towards his voice. He stepped from behind the tree that guarded him as he spoke again. His face looked ugly in the moonlight. "People could do bad, bad things to you."
"I can take care of myself." I said standing up.
HIs muslces flexed. My jaw tightened, I didn't like this. "And you're so sure about this."
"I am." I said sternly. "But you're right, I should be heading home." I took a few steps towards the trail that would lead me back to the safety of my own home. He quickly blocked my escape route, coming closer to me than I would have ever wanted him. "Excuse me." I said, attempting to manouver around him.
"I built this tree house just a little ways away, I thought you might like to see it."
"I'd rather not, it's two A.M. Mr.Hallen."
"Two A.M. Two P.M. odds are we won't both be up here again, together. I say we take advantage of this oppurtunity while we have it." His eyes bored into mine and I defined the look I saw in his eyes, now, as pure evil. I couldn't refuse him. I knew it even then.
"O-Okay."

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

License:

Standard YouTube License

Link to this comment:

Share to:

Uploader Comments (crayZ4FanFics)

  • holy fuck the jonas brothers are gay... they ruined rock for me, worst band out there... next to owl city man this vid sucks!

  • I love Owl City(:

    Don't be a hater

  • @crayZ4FanFics i hate it becuase i am soo god damned addicted to the fire flies song.. but the jonas brothers are fucking terribe;l XD

  • @CrazeKillen honestly, I'm not a big fan of them, I don't really like them at all but no one reads stories about no bodies.

  • gosh i loved reading it a second time

  • haha thanks xD

    ep. 3 should be up now

see all

All Comments (15)

Sign In or Sign Up now to post a comment!
  • Holy crap dude. This is amazing. :) Where was I when you made this? Haha.

  • wow its like lovely bones cool

  • This reminds me of "The Lovely Bones"

  • This is soooooooooo awesome!

    i love it already

Loading...

Alert icon
0 / 00Unsaved Playlist Return to active list
    1. Your queue is empty. Add videos to your queue using this button:
      or sign in to load a different list.
    Loading...Loading...Saving...
    • Clear all videos from this list
    • Learn more