On The Run [Short Film]

After a lie down, something strange enters the room. Can he escape this thing!

Four remakes of this short have been made. One by Charlemange Fezza http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FJsys4QPI_8&feature=channel_page taking the concept of this a putting it into Sim form.

Another is a live action one by LlamaBeetyStudios. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vrBF2iapo6g&feature=channel_page

Also is by one George Atkinson, however, he deleted his original account with it on and hasn't uploaded his other. I suggest you bug him about it on his new account, its whether it :P. Channel is here: http://www.youtube.com/user/GeorgeMillerAtkinson

And the last is by me which you can see by checking out my channel.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• Michael's
• Curry
• Morning
• On
• The
• Run
• Michael
• Dunbar
• STHsuperMovies
• Pink
• Floyd

[smokeysport2]

I thought your camera work was pretty good. Look at what you had to get across. You start with medium-low light in the bedroom scene, quickly change to a dark light environment in a cramped in claustraphobic look hallway and stairs chase scene, then move to bright daylight outside. You used several different perspectives for each scene and that's not easy working in a real house because it's so cramped. But you were able to carry it out and make it look unforced.

[STHsuperMovies07]

Thank you for commenting. :)

[themaltesebippy]

The Fraggle one seems to have been taken down. I'd like to do my own re-imagining of this machinima style, if you don't mind.

[STHsuperMovies07]

Oh please do, I'd love to see it. Its amazing how many people are re-making this little video. Is it really that bad? :P

[pewmanfustudios]

Cool, another remake made!

[themaltesebippy]

I don't think it was bad, on the contrary, I was inspired by it and also George's version.

[STHsuperMovies07]

The reason for it is the director (i.e me) doesn't know what was good to repeat. He only nows whats bad, and might lose what is good in trying to improve the other points. It also might be more of a challenge for you, because I hear finding good points ain't easy. =P

I'm so glad I didn't take offense, except at the camera angles, because I love them so much.

Thank you for your comment.

[STHsuperMovies07]

Lucky (and surprisingly) I thank you for the criticizem on this video. I believe this isn't one of my bests, it was rushed. Thank you, I hope it helps me in the future. One thing I would like to say is, is it possible to say the good things about the video when you criticizes. It does sound like I'm just trying to get praise (maybe because I am), but if you say the good points and bad points of a video it helps.

To Be continued...

[RandomersRock]

And your camera angles were a total mess...U have the nerve 2 criticise our angles...ures were atrosious < Yes, my spelling is bad.  Well, this comment was left by the person who pulls apart every movie she watches...so pleze dont take full personal offence by any comments left by this user. Love Aimyyy

[RandomersRock]

3)When you fall off your bed, you land on your back, in the next frame you are on your hands and knees.

4)You dont use the front door-which is the best route out.

5)You turned into a room at the front of your house and end up comeing through the back :S

To be continued...