Misery Business Preview Shane/Jess/Rory/Dean

It starts at 10 seconds in. This is merely a preview, so criticism is welcome and will be taken into consideration.

I do not own this song or the clips.

I've gotten the clips from various places, but luvtheheaven is my main source now. THANK YOU!!!

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• Gilmore
• Girls
• Rory
• Jess
• Shane
• Dean

[luvtheheaven3]

Aw I love it SO much! Really great so far!! ;) If you really want constructive criticsm, I might say you should try to avoid some of the "talky face" - as in the clips are muted and the song is playing, but you can still totally see the character's mouth moving and talking - you might want to try to minimize that, especially in the last clip with Rory, the lyric is "but I wear the biggest smile", you should really focus more on a smile if possible and Rory should be talking less.

[SailorPiglet]

@luvtheheaven3 Yeah, I'll take a look around, see what I can change. I've been making this one really funky as compared to how I usually do. I'll check out that glitch and see what I can do. Thank you!

[luvtheheaven3]

@SailorPiglet Yeah especially since the other one isn't up anymore it's great that you're doing this, it's really quite impressive so far, I like it a lot. :D

[luvtheheaven3]

Also at 0:22 during the transition in "I waited 8 long months", it's sort of a glitch - you can tell the clip you're transitioning into changes mid-fade...