Hellz Angels- Paper Moon (Danni Ver.) ~ Phunkness Mix

A Remix of Dannielle's 'Paper Moon'.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• paper
• moon
• hellz
• angels
• soul
• eater
• full
• english
• dub
• fandub
• official
• song
• lyrics
• remix
• phunkness
• mix

[shinzogurl]

Good effort dear, but even before I tip your voice, you REALLY need to re-listen to yourself recorded before uploading and listen objectively. Did you like how it sounded? If the answer was "kind of" it would probably be best to try again or just not do it.

Your voice isn't terrible, but your timing, even at the very begining is off and you have little emotion. You have diphthong with your notes. Switching pitches isn't all that hard, but you really need to work on it.

[Marluxiarose77]

Alright, stating the obvious here, but this is the perfect example of how a beautiful song can be torn to shreds. I applaud your effort, but to be blunt, you relinquished every fabric of beauty and epicness this song contains. I cannot stress it more that people who dub great works of art must make sure they do it justice. Otherwise they give the original work a black eye and are seen as being no better than a blind fool singing terribly at an American Idol audition.

[JurouTheWolf]

Timing is key when making a song. Practicing pitch also helps. No offense, its a good try.

[Mrdudeguy]

@Blackdrive44 feedback is important when trying to improve.

[Blackdrive44]

@Mrdudeguy true but... thts not nice.

[Mrdudeguy]

I'm sorry but this is terrible.

keep practicing and don't upload until you have something worth hearing

[tykingsketch9]

im a little dead on the inside now

[luckylife6]

I advise you tobuy a good microphone because you seem too be creative. Keep practising! :)

[Cyber4el]

don`t like this version, sorry..

[VivaLaMattStyle]

I like this better then the Original Version you did Danni :)