myspace commercial - 24 seconds long

I shortened this to 24 seconds from the previous clip of 42 seconds long.
I followed a bit of Sidney Lumet's advices.
He said if something is not necessary, it should be removed. And I did it. I got rid of its "BGM."
"Work on it. Recheck it a day or two later again. And cut unnecessary parts off."
This crazily simple story can't be shortened into 15 seconds whose length is for typical TV commercial?

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Film & Animation

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• myspace2