Pitch for Sci Fi Screenplay "Capt. Gage"

Attention Hollywood agents and producers. If you're looking for a science fiction screenplay, look no further!

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Film & Animation

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• Hollywood
• sci
• fi
• screenplay
• script
• movie
• pitch
• synopsis

[CaptGage]

Thanks very much! I'm already rewriting it since I had it critiqued last Christmastime.

[CaptGage]

In what way?

[VideogameAnswerMan]

I pray for blessings on your rewrite. ^_^ I would like to take a look at it too. By the way Gary please send me a message with your email address if you can, I would like you to critique my script, which I might have a draft done in a few hours, it would be a great help to me especially from someone like you who has a real love for science fiction stuff

[VideogameAnswerMan]

don't listen to destructive criticism, destructive criticism is useless for everything except tearing down the heart, self esteem and spirit of its target.

But looking at your script idea from a constructively critical perspective, I think its excellent, I can see a great movie being made out of this, I like the idea of a narcotic atmosphere, and a sole planet that's a police state is fascinating you can do a lot with this story.

[VideogameAnswerMan]

I think its a great idea! ^_^ Don't listen to people who give destructive criticism, destructive criticism is useless, save for destroying someone's self esteem.

But looking at your idea with constructive criticism, I honestly find nothing wrong with it, I think its an excellent idea.

[Flaw55]

horrible.