Your Eclipse - original poem -

Your eclipse by brazdolph

Come with me
Don´t you worry
It´s for free
Close your eyes
For a surprise
Breathe in , breathe out
In and out
Listen to my voice, your voice
Let your mind evolve, rejoice
Listen to me speak
Forget all that´s weak and bleak
Follow your imagination
Wallow in inspiration, elation
Swallow up your frustration, damnation
Let it go
Let it flow
Let it sow sunflower seeds that glow
And lead you to a land of hope
Where you can cope
Where you can smile
At fireflies and butterflies
And starry skies
Where you can dance
As in a trance
In full romance
With your own stance
Toward this world
And hurl yourself into a pool
All made of jewels and
Precious stones
With rainbow tones
Where you can swim and not be grim or gloomy
For all is blooming and thriving
While you are diving
Deep in your thoughts
And all sore spots
Of your own soul
Who plays this role
Of being strong
Against the wrong ones
Who´ll make you grieve
While they deceive and con
Both Mary and John who
To our dismay
Will then betray
Their own good deeds
Their Gods and creeds
That taken for granted
Were devilishly enchanted
Forgive and forget
Your sins and the threat
Of doomed days to come
With froth and scum
Go back to the fields
Where peacefulness yields
And lie on the grass
Where dragonflies pass
And you will then see
Your sorrows won´t last
Massage your own ego
Stretch out your limbs
And think out your whims
Focus on your deepest, darkest wishes
And savour them
Exotic dishes
Lick your lips
And sail ships
And come to grips
With your eclipse

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[phekwig]

This has a good rhythm the way you read it... Did you ever think of adding a beat to it? Ah, but that would steal some of the thunder from your echoing voice...

[NewBrazdolph]

@phekwig ..DaMan is one guy you should check , his poetry is like music to the ears...mine? i´m just an amateur chick..wait..dolphin! lol..

i like your vids that take me to places where i´ll never go.

[medicinesocks]

a luscious, sumptuous poem. a real feast

[NewBrazdolph]

@medicinesocks ..cheers! xo

[ReliableInsider]

This would be an awesome rap. Do it, Braz! Get some beats and go for it.

[NewBrazdolph]

@ReliableInsider ..i dont have the skills to do it ..thanks for watching Peter!

[clayLavl]

i like the text but it's totally dishonest. i know the REAL you and this ain't YOU. it musta been made to impress some fool into believing you're this calm, cool person. that couldn't be further from the truth. you hate the world and everyone in it. if only you had the guts to say it. sure, when we first got together i saw the facade and bought into it but soon enough i discovered who you really are. oh well, doesn't matter now. as i said, good text just..totally dishonest.

[clayLavl]

a great masterpiece.

[NewBrazdolph]

@VisionGhostPoet ..aw, that´s sweet coming from you...i´m elated to have you come by. xo

[NewBrazdolph]

@AntaresInScorpius ...nice..i´m glad you have liked it..thx.

[NewBrazdolph]

@floydstinkyboy ..nifty is a word i learned from you these days...xo to you and ur dawg..lol

[NewBrazdolph]

@KrinkleCartoonShow ...that bunny of yours is funny! it´s a donkey in disguise! lol..thanks dear.

[NewBrazdolph]

@MrDaMan ..thanks for the visit DaMan... I feel flattered, since you know..you´re one of my favorite poets, along with DRC, Dashpoet, VG...xo