Oh, Please- Original Song

I wrote this song a few months ago, and I've only played it a handful of times since. This is the only song for which I've ever finished both lyrics and accompaniment. I hadn't really intended to record it just yet, but I got the urge to make a new video today and this is what came out. Some day it will be electric, with lots of violin. I hope you like it.


Before you comment on sound quality--- I hope to make a version of this soon with a better microphone, but until then keep your pants on, please.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Rock
• Acoustic
• Guitar
• Original
• Song
• Singing
• Oh
• Please

[GilsMusic]

Great song!! Definitely would sound great with a full band for sure!! 5*****

[Musicgirl82]

Thanks Gil :)

[bubejunkie]

HEY NOW! i like that. I like your progression. Kind of dark, like a hard rock ballad. Definitely not your typical "song written by a chick". Know what i mean? It sounds deep. It would be great if you added a bridge part, or break down. Verse/chorus sounds great, but bridge is needed. That would add more depth in the arrangement. Good job!

[Musicgirl82]

Thanks so much! This song is definitely not finished yet, but the video solidified what I already had. Thanks again :)

[ArmenianZipmanwwwi]

haha nice

[Musicgirl82]

Thanks for the comment :)

[jcmegabyte]

Nice composition and performance - Good job! :-)

[ianh1961]

U are such a soulful lady... Want to come and live in England???

[ianh1961]

hey babe, you got all of 22 sqd looking at ya, XXX

[MyMotleyCrew]

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[MyMotleyCrew]

Hey this is Alex Davis.

nice vid!!!

[somedrinkingimplied]

Very good song. Kind of reminds me of p.j. harvey. you would do a nice cover of any of her songs i am sure!

[ReyMichaels]

Hey, this is Tristen from your 6th hour class. You rock! See you monday :D