Family Guy - Brian Novel Typography
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seriously, thanks for that extremely helpful comment lacking any constructive criticism at all
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@nomologic youre actually right ...the typography is not that great
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So, Brian, how's that self-help book you've been writing? You know, the one you've been working on for about three hours?
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Excellent, some feedback:
At "Stack of pares" the letters could be a stack of papers"
Just basically more imagery and i would have got wood for sure.
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What episode is that?!
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dont worry, nomologic is from the netherlands.
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I should start playing this to myself whenever I start slacking off on my own writing.
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This cracked me up. I never would have thought to do something like this. I love watching these things. It was pretty easy to read in my opinion, and the way that a lot of phrases started in the middle of another one was a nice touch—the way that Stewie went back to. Now you just have to do that higher pitched one, hmm?
A little continuation, maybe, bring the point back to center? Hmm?
Gotta running gag, hm? Little recurring joke? Hmm?
Nah, that's OK, get to it whenever. =D
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improve the readability maybe by having it flow more
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Oh yes. That's brilliant. Find someone who's working on a novel and show them that video!
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watch the second one in related videos, wheres my money
hi, i love this! just wondering what program you used to make it? like apple motion or something?
finnstertrax 2 years ago
I did it using After Effects. Thanks :D
skateEnjoyLive 2 years ago
HAHA i LOVE this!!!
gotta gotta nice little video you've been workin on, huh?
Love0723x 3 years ago 17
haha thanks!! :D
skateEnjoyLive 2 years ago
That line from Stewie is a great choice (in other words you beat me to it!). Great job man!
KeyframeHolder 3 years ago 3
thanks man, much appreciated
skateEnjoyLive 3 years ago