Short film made for the San Diego 48 hour film festival. Written, shot, and edited in 48 hours. I directed a crew of 45 people and oversaw from pre-production tp post.
I think the concept is cute, but it's WAY too long. Comedy depends on good pacing, and if the timing isn't right, you risk losing your audience. Also, the longest scene in the movie was two guys sitting on a couch talking- how boring is that!? I think you could have cut the movie down to the minimum of four minutes, and maybe shot scenes of them walking someplace (to get food) and that would have helped a lot.
0:58, win
Blo0daXe 3 years ago
Instead of BFF -- ZFF, Zombie Friends Forever!
Yes, refrigerators are useful! LOL
Pizza is one great taste for Zombies!
IsawManosTheHandsof 3 years ago
screw that guy, i loved it. acting could be better though
kikkimikki 4 years ago
I think the concept is cute, but it's WAY too long. Comedy depends on good pacing, and if the timing isn't right, you risk losing your audience. Also, the longest scene in the movie was two guys sitting on a couch talking- how boring is that!? I think you could have cut the movie down to the minimum of four minutes, and maybe shot scenes of them walking someplace (to get food) and that would have helped a lot.
Hope this helps,
Gene.
cinematicarts 4 years ago