I like it. Good idea, just need to work on the following:
Voice acting was pretty good but could be better and you should put some mild effects on the voice. The camera angles were kind of played out and especially for the boring shots, I think a more unique angle would be better. Also the boring font on black ending kind of killed it. Finallly, a bit of effect on the actual video (bring out cool and dark colors and bright colors when hes outside) would help. All in all, great work!
I like it. Good idea, just need to work on the following:
Voice acting was pretty good but could be better and you should put some mild effects on the voice. The camera angles were kind of played out and especially for the boring shots, I think a more unique angle would be better. Also the boring font on black ending kind of killed it. Finallly, a bit of effect on the actual video (bring out cool and dark colors and bright colors when hes outside) would help. All in all, great work!
wimp10 2 years ago
Thank you, and thanks for the feedback.
Jeffzz893 2 years ago
i realy like it even if it could need here and there some tweaks to be completely epic, great work!
enforce007 2 years ago
thanks, and what do you think could be better I like feedback lol
Jeffzz893 2 years ago