A really depressing poem

its a very triggering poem so if you get triggered by that stuff please exit this video now! i do not own song but i own the poem

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• TheEliShow2009

[ThaEmoPrincessXX]

It's brick by boring brick- paramore

[TheEliShow2009]

@ThaEmoPrincessXX no its not. its from mayday parade

[A2ndhaze567]

the poem is truly remarkable but how come people that write poems in your fashion always over use pain and emphasize on it. It does ruin the extreme horrors of life. In my opinion living life fooled into thinking your accepted and being isolated watching everyone be happy is true sadness. Thumbs up to the equalibrium

[TheEliShow2009]

@A2ndhaze567 thankks =] i wrote it about 4 years ago and found it around last year. i still write poems going to put some more of them up on here. (just my REALLY good ones) once i have some time

[NightmareCries]

heres a poem i wrote its called downwards

hurt lost pain alone numb in the heart cold to the bone blind by hatred hurt by love cry scream shout out to the world im blind im stupid lifes not fair whats the point why am i here my voice the whisper inside my head tell me scream at me to end all my pain please turn into a video i love it much real name kanya coffman!!

[TheEliShow2009]

@NightmareCries yes i will turn this into a vid =3. just write me all of that in a message im thinking of putting all of my poems on some literacy website just not sure which ones i can just put there. i dnt want n e one taking credit for em specially since ima turn them into a song

[kinzzerrr]

what song is this??

[Beckyplayful]

Do u think this is a real story?

[superstar1722]

@KatieTheGreatTegan7 That is actually really good :) I love it

[KatieTheGreatTegan7]

I wrote one but I didn't name it, please don't judge; i know im not that good. /:

I sit alone in the dark and cold, thinking about how this pain gets old. Will my sorrow ever stop? I crouch even lower as my tears begin to drop.

[broddog100]

Feel it man

[pyroman71121]

This is more a story than a poem, I feel you could write a good novel though