So I finished my folk song. I hope you like it.
Lyrics:
Verse:
Well I don't know where you've been
Or who you've been with
And I know it's not for me
To understand this
This predicament you're in
Let alone you
Oh my Lord, oh my Lord, what shall I do?
Well it's been some seven years
And you're still searchin'
For the one to dry your tears
And stop the hurtin'
Will it take some seven more
For you to realize
Oh my Lord, Oh my Lord, what shall I do?
Chorus:
Baby girl
Take a look at what you're doing to yourself
I know they've damaged you
But baby girl
Your wounds and scars aren't permanent
They can be healed
Oh they will be healed
Verse:
Well he's up to nothin' good
No one ever was
Was it worth part of your soul,
To have a fraction of love,
From a fraction of a man,
Who left you cryin' out
Oh my Lord, Oh my Lord, what shall I do?
Chorus:
Baby girl
Take a look at what you're doing to yourself
I know they've damaged you
But baby girl
The gaping hole inside of you
It can be filled
Oh it will be filled
Bridge (Instrumental)
Verse:
Well I don't know where you've been
Or who you've been with
But my darling, understand
I couldn't care less
I just long for your return
And to embrace you
Oh my Lord, oh my Lord, that's what I'll do
Chorus:
Baby girl
Take a look at what you're doing to yourself
I know they've damaged you
But baby girl
You will never be unfixable
You can be healed
Oh you will be healed
Baby girl
Take a look at what you're doing to yourself
I know they've damaged you
But baby girl
The gaping hole inside of you
It can be filled
Oh it will be filled
Baby girl
Take a look at what you're doing to yourself
I know they've damaged you
But baby girl
Your wounds and scars aren't permanent
They can be healed
Oh they will be healed
LOVE IT!! More bluesy that folk to my way of listening - a little bit of Paul McCartney as well in the very nice bridgey thing. I am impressed and delighted little brother!!
WildBranches 7 months ago