Scribbles on my Heart // Part 4.

80+ comments for the next one.
I'm dead serious; if I don't receive
the comments in two weeks, I'll cancel
for sure, like I'm cancelling Erase&Rewind.

SORRY for the LATE post! D:
Which is why I did give you both povs,
but Joe's is really short. I got really lazy,
sorry. & I know this part is especially
lacking...

I'm currently suffering from..WRITERS BLOCK!
:o

1. Favorite/ Least favorite part?
2. Anything I can improve on?

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Category:

Entertainment

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• mzzjudylee
• jemi
• joe
• jonas
• demi
• lovato

[4EvErJeMiTrUeLoVe]

heey why there are two same parts ? :O

BTW, love the story(: it's amazing

[mzzjudylee]

@4EvErJeMiTrUeLoVe there's not? You might be confused because this is a double point of view story. You get to read Demi's point of view and then Joe's.

[PorkYouPineBlues]

1. da cheek kiss. Palpable XD

2. Using palpable in the right context. "The steam was palpable..." is WRONG. No 'fence though. I'm just a vocab buff .Palpable is more so for emotions like:"The tension in the room was palpable" or somethin' like that.

I totally get you on the whole comments thing i hate it when peps take 4ever 2 comment and when they give u dry shit lyk "more" or "love it" and I actually ask questions so they can't say that they had nothing to write.

[mzzjudylee]

Oh, I usually use palpable for emotions, but I didn't know it was just limited to just that. Thank you.

[JustLivinLife132]

im sorry but its not all about comments honey.... its kinda rude that you cancel if you don't get your "specific" amount of comments. shouldn't writing a series be about the fun in it and reading what comments you do get without the ones you get from force? its just not right...im sorry.... i love your writing don't get me wrong. i just think it's not right. please don't hate me for saying my opinion.

[mzzjudylee]

You might think it's rude that I ask for certain amount of comments, but I think it's quite rude when people don't even take thirty seconds to comment on a story I spent hours on. & honestly, I'm only human, I can't help but to feel a bit greedy. & writing was fun before people harassed me to post up more.

[WorldOFJonasx]

1. when he took care of her

2. Umm no your better then me at this.

[lovedrunkx33]

1. A; My favorite part was when you made both POVS

B; I liked every minute of it

2. your writing is flawless :)

[superfan15vane]

Joe's the sweetest guy on earth, I LOVE HIM!!!

[xJemiStoriesxx]

Don't cancel it :(

It took like 2/3 weeks, but who cares!?

You're an amazing writer, everyone loves how you write, you're beautiful on the inside & outside, and no-one's going to give up on you. And no-one can take that away from you!

[mickey141480]

i love it

[NileyUniverse]

So much detail. <3333 Its perfect. I loved every word! Joseph, is such a stalker. :)

[carlapvp]

ok!

this is my favorite story! please don't stop!

I just found your account tday!! (puppy dog face)

[mrsjjonas1024]

omg this was sooo good i want joe and demi to go out!!