(pt1)This is the first and only episode (so far)of my Southern Gothic series. In this episode a serial killer who finds his victims thru a 900 teledating service meets his match when he hooks up with a mysterious country cutie from the backwoods of the Ozarks.
Ok. I like it.
But...
1) Frame your subject. Learn the Rule of Thirds for framing and shooting.
2) Lighting. Some of the scenes were very dark. A 500w worklight or two works wonders.
3) Editing. Ask yourself the question 'Does this advance my story?'. If the answer is 'No', cut it out.
All the best,
Ian
EonPeon 4 years ago