Don't Come Back (This Love) acoustic version

A song I wrote with the band, the usual line up is, Rhythm guitar (electric, with distortion), Lead (electric, with distortion) guitar, drums, Lead vocals and backing vocals.
It's hard to record the band playing cos you'd blow my mics on the quiet parts, so I had to record the parts myself acousticly.
Enjoy, and bear in mind that my it sounds much better with the band, so this is just a taste. :D
here's the lyrics:

Wake up arise, open your eyes, take a look through the mist now

it's no surprise that you find you're staring at an abyss now

and it shows, yeah I know, every time that we kiss now

and I say so, wherd it go, cos I'm starting to miss ya

I'm saying where did it go?!

this love, is falling apart

this love, is breaking apart

this love, oh baby can't we have it just like the start

this love, so please come back because you're breaking my heart

let's go!




it used to be you and me arm in arm in the park babe

we could speak honestly we could joke we could joke we could laugh babe

but it seems recently you've gone icy and dark
is it me or is it just that time of month again?

it worries me terribly and it's leaving a mark babe

yeah it's leaving a mark

(chorus)


drumming my fingers cos she's running late

give her a call in case she forgot the date

look out the door I see a car pull over

and she's inside making out with her neighbor,,

get up and go baby, this is over

this love, has fallen apart

this love, has broken apart

this love, don't wanna see you an I don't wanna talk

this love, so don't come back because you've broken my heart

this love, you've torn it apart

this love, you've smashed it to shards

this love, if that's how you see it than that's fair enough

this love, but don't come crying asking for a new start

this love

this love

this love

this love

By Daniel Lukes (guitar solo by Sherwyn Appadu)

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[MiniDuncan]

SUPER SPECIAL AWESOME BRO! better mic neeed for more pr0ness. BUT STILL MAN, MAKE AN ALBUM SO I CAN BUY IT AND BE LIKE OMFG WINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN­NNNNNNN!

[turbothingy]

@MiniDuncan LOL that's true

we're working on one man, it takes Tiiiiiimmmme, but please buy it!

[CJWproductions]

Dude! I've also put together a band! We haven't done any songs yet though. Kinda working on some.

Awesome.

You sound like you're not controlling your breath very well. I have the same problem. There's guides to help if you wanna check them out they're easy to find online for free.

I wanna see where this goes, I wish you the best! 8D