Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 14: Revise the Bridge Lyrics)

New version with post chorus, and new bridge and ending change...
more like a party.
added some radio shack moog in the solo.
and sped it up just a little more than last time.


...they can't take that away!

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• cuomo
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• taylor2d2
• version

[darlajoe]

Okay, this is what I have to say about this.

Wow. Wow. Wow.. and just.. WOW! I love this. You're a genius. I think this fits perfectly. You rule.

[taylor2d2]

thank you very much.

[nathanScreation]

I'm with FMTHbandAZ, the synth definitly brings back the good'ol days of weezer, and it actually makes the song sound like weezer song, not just any goofy pop-rock song with a hook.

nice production too...

[taylor2d2]

Thanks! i like this song bunches and bunches. to me it sounds like a mix of the blue and green albums... the turquoise album.

[nathanScreation]

add some out of control feedback and uber-personal lyrics and you've got pinkertuoise...

[taylor2d2]

then add a cowboy hat and a mustache....

[JelloTitan]

I LOVE IT! way to go man, perfect fit. I even love the whole keyboard synth part.

[snaptheuntitledman]

I hate to beat this marvelous effort down but, with the post-chorus doesn't anyone think that it should not appear after the first chorus? I like to be original too but it's kinda like the chorus needs to ride out a couple times before the listener gets another part. The post-chorus is very strong and I think where it is, it sounds almost as if the song is going to end after say 1minute 5seconds.

Having made this point, the post chorus might rid the need for a bridge, or maybe not

[MrsBrightside55]

how come there are videos of pandas sneezing and it has millions of views?! i mean how come this video only has a little over 2,000!?!?! this song is freakin amazing how can this not be popular!?

[CupcakeMuffinFun]

man, this is pretty awesome!!! way better than the original version!! good job!=)))

[dankproducer]

not bad :P

[systemfan2049]

taylor2d2 your music is awesome i will buy the weezer album if this is on it

[JohnL311]

When I got to the moog in the solo I started wondering if you had done research on the instruments Weezer used on the blue album and other older albums because it sounded so perfect!

[lazrpo1nt3r]

...faster than this? He already upped the BPM a bit.

[TwisterCT10]

I know, right!