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Uploaded by JonasPlanetarium on Nov 19, 2008
My first Video MADE BY ME :D2 Thinggs i need you to tell me:1.Bad Points.2.Good Points.Id be VERY greatfull to knwo and improve.Enjoy (:
Film & Animation
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good:
nice song choice
you want to learn!
sorry that there are'nt much 'goods', but overall i thought it was pretty good for a first vid!!
i wish you a lot of luck with ya next vids!
^^greetings from holland ya^^
j1hk2 2 years ago
all right, well...:
bad: bella talks very fast and most of the clips are fast, but the music is slow.
there's something of text standing in te middle of the image/vid. i dont know if you did that on purpose, but that kinda things are pretty anoying.
the vid ends very curt, so thats a bit strange :)
and last but not least, i would let the interview,or the 'non-movie-parts', away...
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good:
nice song choice
you want to learn!
sorry that there are'nt much 'goods', but overall i thought it was pretty good for a first vid!!
i wish you a lot of luck with ya next vids!
^^greetings from holland ya^^
j1hk2 2 years ago
all right, well...:
bad: bella talks very fast and most of the clips are fast, but the music is slow.
there's something of text standing in te middle of the image/vid. i dont know if you did that on purpose, but that kinda things are pretty anoying.
the vid ends very curt, so thats a bit strange :)
and last but not least, i would let the interview,or the 'non-movie-parts', away...
j1hk2 2 years ago