"Lies" - song based on lyrics by DisOutlaw

My first real try to make a song from scratch. I had lyrics written by DisOutlaw, and thought of music to go along with his words. Made it in just a 2 hours, so I didn't really work much on the "solo" part (there is a place for guitar solo, of course).
"Lies"
I am so tired of being here
In surroundings of your heat and care
Now I feel that Im free
I fill my chest with the crystal air
Im free from love; Im free from hate
Free from regrets that so unfair
Im free from feelings we create
Im free from prison we prepare=== (guitar solo)===
I can feel what freedom is
I am the one I want to be
Dont need another chance to start
For you theres no place in my heart==
(heavy bass lines, piano impro)==

Now I am free
From predicted destiny
Yea, I am free
Ive lifted down the key
From my heart
Cause soon I will depart
And heal my heart
Thats been broken apart==(2 times, heavy)==

Time took away the love we had
I will forget our time together
Turn the page that is too sad
Stop the pain that brings me nether
What I will get instead
Is the sense of falling free
I dont know whats good or bad
I close my eyes just not to see

Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to pray
Dont need another chance to start
For you theres no place in my heart

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[Majoofi]

you're a good composer too. I'd love to here it sung. This should be getting more attention.

[LBQ2TS]

This song deserves to be more popular ! Greetings from France, you truely rule, EVEN when you are dancing :D

(I'm aware you must get a thousand of requests per day, but I would really love to listen to you playing "Deceptacon" by Le Tigre, just because it sounds like a challenging song for a pianist !)

[yepw]

So good!! - have you ever recorded the song with the whole arrangement and with vocals? I wonder how it sounds...especially with vocals, I think it would complete it! :)

[hyugiuhihjiljpjop]

this is beautiful.

[jerbil666]

daivd meadows is into bondage

[rickc747]

damn youre amazing

[Morlyman]

It's really good! Nice job!