Needs more dynamics, it's really beautiful but feels sort of bland emotionally. I know that probably has a lot to do with the fact it's a computer(measures 23-26 will be lovely with a human touch). Perhaps you could try having somewhat of a build up to measure 42? Keep in mind I know very little about stringed music, I am almost purely a singer.
It is honestly very beautiful though, very good work for a work in progress!
I think it sounds quite wonderful :)
TheTomothy37 2 months ago
Needs more dynamics, it's really beautiful but feels sort of bland emotionally. I know that probably has a lot to do with the fact it's a computer(measures 23-26 will be lovely with a human touch). Perhaps you could try having somewhat of a build up to measure 42? Keep in mind I know very little about stringed music, I am almost purely a singer.
It is honestly very beautiful though, very good work for a work in progress!
julian1000 2 months ago