Aching (Original)

The winds bring chills, yeah the kind that makes your spine shake The moon looks down upon me, yeah it frowns upon me.
The sky so full of darkness, so clearly sheds it sadness,
Rain so soft yet sharp, cuts straight through my aching heart.
Pain to sooth my pain for wrongs I cannot right,
For who could love a woman who loves one by day, one by night
Chorus
Like a leaf drifting down a creek over rocks and stones through ripping tides.
My heart longs and seeks light
I desire to end this night, this night.

My heart is torn in two
I love the day,
but the secret night cuts straight to my aching heart.
He is the one who sooths my soul,
but the day, he is my loved one.
The games we play at night, the truth we hide from light, my heart is crying, night needs no love from me.
Chorus
Repeat 1st Vs.

I have done wrong, and wrong has been done to me.Lord let me please learn from my mistakes .May I lean more and more upon you in faith. I wish to live by your will.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• femalefolksinger
• Jenny
• Moyer
• hiflynblues
• folk
• rock

[whinersmusic]

I can hear all of your words ... I like this very much! It seems to me some users of YouTube may expect quality beyond the nature of the forum. By this I mean beyond demo or into the realm of broadcast TV. I guess that's one way to approach viewing but YouTube is so much more than that. What you have here demonstrates good songwriting and performance I think. And I also think it's good to put material "out there" as fast as it is written. I can see you doing this live to an audience.

[hiflynblues]

I really appreciate your words. I have since posted some live music videos.

[gambla153]

the guitar part was a melody ripoff off of the song called Stonesour Bother, it had the same rythem just different coords.

[hiflynblues]

Honestly never heard it. So no ripoff, just a poor similarity. My guitar stuff sucks, so I kind of feel bad for the comparison.

[taumm]

I think you have talent both as performer and writer--but I confess I did not understand what you were singing about.Either enunciate more emphatically or add subtitles--a great innovation! This is not meant to be critical. YOu are good!

[hiflynblues]

I added the lyric to the descriptions. I hope that might help, although I confess you are right and I need to do this one over again. Thanks, and enjoy!

[hiflynblues]

Again, thanks for your input!

[pieceworkstudios]

I thought I commented on this a while ago..der.

Well, I love it and love your voice so much with or with out music.

[raw420x]

Okay, this one is also a great original.

[melbookermusic]

...very cool!!

[rio197]

well-written. This song is uniquely yours, no one else would be able to carry it like you.

[Epicus]

english prz? how can a riff be a ripoff if if it's different chords. a lot of songs have the same rhythm, there's only so many rhythmic timings in music.

[MaddyAni]

u are awesome girl, u really are! keep doing it!