Episode 2, Part 2: "I'm So Sorry", The Weakness
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Wow!!!
This keeps getting better and better...
Love the story line and the background music,
Eugene
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Oh very nice second half. The closeup and the two monologues mixing. You could have spun that a bit more but the 'break' to reallity with 'the question' was great. That white lit face in the top right corner just magic.
Great drama
Having a bit of a problem with a sigarette that does not seem to get shorter though >:-)
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I'm impressed that you focus on psychological aspects of being a vampire, not just the 'biting' part, or how 'evil' vampires must be. I love that you illustrate how evil is within us all along, and that, given a choice, some decide to embrace it willingly.
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Flashback was awesome!
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wow, that was an excellent script!
dogpatchdebbie 3 years ago
LOL - and I thought it would be under 10 minutes. I'm such a maroon. I have a fellow Ytuber that helps me with my snappy dialog: cim75. Has a gift for creeply story telling and giving Zahn that old fashioned flowery language... you should check him out!
toolgirl150 3 years ago
I'm subbed to cim75..he is a really cool guy! I entered his halloween contest!
I've not kept up that much lately...he was off for a little while!
dogpatchdebbie 3 years ago
Yeah, did a lot of stickam time and just moved, I think he's going to be making more vids soon :D
toolgirl150 3 years ago
Those flashbacks are extremely effective, reminding us that the vampire was once human, and allowing us to empathise with him, despite the evil within him.
podpictures 4 years ago
Ah - a storyteller after my own heart.... :DDDD
toolgirl150 4 years ago