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Hi, I found out just today that you make a comment on my video ....The work that I have done is in mx and the resolution is muc much higher in that.splitting in two my video is always a big file ...so i do not know.
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For example, by piecing together fragments of information and deliberately 'leaving out' or 'inserting blankness' (voids!), the strategic framework allows the audience to use their imagination to 'fill in the gaps' and therefore 'participate' in the aesthetic understanding of of the work.
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In the literature theory written by Wolfgang Iser (published in his book titled: The Act of Reading, a theory of aesthetic response. Published by The Johns Hopkins University Press). He realized the importance of the COMPOSITION of a systematic framework in order for an interactive aesthetic communication to happen.
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Can you invert the black and white colour of your graphics to emphasize which are the 'void' moments? There needs to be more variety where you might perhaps deliberately exaggerate the regular rhythmic moments, and exaggerate the distorted absence moments... in order for your idea to become clear.
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The music of the harps is too consistently played through out, and it doesn't seem to work with your graphics, i.e. can you mute the sound in order to respond to the voids moments in your graphics? or can your harps instrumental music begin with a calm and rhythmic dance, which reaches a climax by increasing its temple and mutes at a precise moment of 'void' with your drawings?
I wonder if you can also compose your film in a similar strategic way, in which the occasional blank clip or muted sound would work with your idea of the 'sound void'...... and to communicate your theme overall. KTTK OR TKKT
TKKTLSBU 4 years ago
I did not want to put the sound as I think in a movie made by a student the music should be yours...my idea was to do not put the sound but the suggetcion of my tutor was having sound .....i wish I could have a crit lke that a long time ago ......regards
TKKTLSBU 4 years ago
Can you use sound editing software to experiment with this idea? Can you record and combine your 'sound made from polyuterane strings that produce rhythmic oscillation by the wind' into the film? I can imagine it would sound very interesting, but its a pity that I can't hear it from your film? It would be nice to hear the noise from your oscillation, and the wind.....
TKKTLSBU 4 years ago
I wish I would have the toime to make a model .....
TKKTLSBU 4 years ago
Your written description of the project sounds very interesting, however, the theme isn't so clearly communicated yet. The idea of 'sound' is probably only been investigated in your drawings+graphics, but not so much in your animation yet. The animation could have a lot more potential to communicate/experiement with your theme.
TKKTLSBU 4 years ago
my idea of this video is to give a presentation of the site analysis and te second part a flair of the project .i did not intend to put my proposal there,like drawings and animation.
TKKTLSBU 4 years ago