Public Speaking Class - Topic: Cultural Artifacts - My Dogs.

This is recorded in my speech class. We were to pick a cultural artifact for our topics to discuss as an informative speech. My class critiques were:


Name -- Kimberley H.
Intro -- interesting start. Add a clear preview of points and transition to body.
Body -- good flow and the speech was well organized. The aspect of how they are a part of your family was well stated. I needed to know how the culture of dog ownership influences and shapes you.
Conclusion -- well summarized. good memorable end.
Citations -- movie, need second citation.
Delivery -- good verbal delivery. Appropriate gestures. Good eye contact. Avoid looking back at screen so much.
Outline -- incorrect numbering. Missing citations.
Time -- 4:59

Here's a link to my SELF EVALUATION:
http://kimmib0o.tumblr.com/post/13552937751/public-speaking-what-not-to-do-2-...
What else do I need to work on?

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• Personal