11 Second Club October 2010

My first 11 second club entry

Category:

Film & Animation

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• animation
• 11
• second
• club
• October
• 2010
• Bio
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[Tyannalyn]

The orange guy is like "WTF?" xD

[Buddyb309]

@Tyannalyn Yup! you got it! :-D

[TalentedOrangeTv]

This is amazing. It looks like the work of a true proffesional.

[Buddyb309]

@TalentedOrangeTv lol not professional yet. Someday maybe.

[KeekeeKarin5]

I'm not sure why the guy below me is so judgemental, because I think your animation is great! The lip-synching is really well done and on time, and the motions they make are exaggerated in a good way. Nice job!

[Buddyb309]

@KeekeeKarin5 Relax, I know the RotitaYamaneko personally. And I actually encourage people to critique my work. She is just trying to help me improve. I've been looking at this animation for the past month and a pair of fresh eyes catch things I miss.

[Riverstorm108]

i think when he stumbles, its kind of weird because the voice is going steady while he stumbles, and when someone stumbles their words usually come out a little different like a strain. if your using audio, try making him stumble at a time when he's not talking, or findind a part in his line where it could sound like he stumbles.

but its /really/ good. what software do you use?

[Tyannalyn]

@Buddyb309 Lol XD

[Buddyb309]

@RotitaYamaneko There were so many places I wanted just a 8th second longer pause. But the audio track was what it was. It was a fun challenge, and I really did want to tweak this more.

[RotitaYamaneko]

I know you were running out of time but parts I found uneasy were: "but in the end, time" needs work and I believe he moves too much at the last words. I like the ears down but maybe it could of been done sooner, like he remembers.. then says it.

Either way man, good job and good luck! Love the breathing motions!