Would You Forgive Me Then?

Loading...

Sign in or sign up now!
Alert icon
Upgrade to the latest Flash Player for improved playback performance. Upgrade now or more info.
2,278
Loading...
Alert icon
Sign in or sign up now!
Alert icon

Uploaded by on Jan 7, 2008

A poem I wrote

I'm sorry I broke your favorite toy
I didn't mean to throw it
When you tossed it and it glided so beautifully
To break, I didn't know it
Even though you are angry
And you kicked me in my shin,
If I did your chores for a month,
Would you forgive me then?

I'm sorry I missed that test
And got a C on my report card
It wasn't that I didn't understand
I guess it was just a little hard
Even though you asked me to study
Over and over again
If I tried to do better in school,
Would you forgive me then?

I'm sorry I ate your cookie
It was just sitting on a plate
Even though it was for after dinner
I just couldn't seem to wait
Even though you said you'd make more
And I offered to pitch in,
If I didn't lie to you anymore,
Would you forgive me then?

I'm sorry I forgot to take out the trash
And now our house smells really bad
It wasn't like I didn't hear you,
So do you have to get so mad?
Even though I took it out,
And put it in the bin,
If I promised to do the dishes for a week,
Would you forgive me then?


I'm sorry I ran away,
But the fighting was just too much
You didn't have to yell,
Cause all I needed was a crutch,
Even though I can't lean on you,
And I'm in dire need of a friend,
If I promised to stay here forever,
Would you forgive me then?

I'm sorry I messed up so many times,
And now I can't go back,
My heart's been ripped to pieces,
And I'm sure yours is fighting back,
Even though we were in love,
And said it again and again,
If I never forgot your name,
Would you forgive me then?

Thank you God in heaven,
For all the mercy and grace
Without it I am pretty sure
That each day would be hard to face
Even though I know you do
Please free me from my sin,
I'll try my best to be like you,
So you won't have to forgive me again.

  • likes, 1 dislikes

Link to this comment:

Share to:
see all

All Comments (4)

Sign In or Sign Up now to post a comment!
  • oh my gosh!!! that was so so so so so sooooo good. ugh i wish i could write. omg i cant get over how good that was. k im rambling. buh bye

  • Very good, Bucky. As always, you're a terrific writer.

  • wow what a poem it you'll try to life that way you'll go far in this life and the next one too

  • aww, nice poem.

Loading...
Alert icon
0 / 00Unsaved Playlist Return to active list
    1. Your queue is empty. Add videos to your queue using this button:
      or sign in to load a different list.
    Loading...Loading...Saving...
    • Clear all videos from this list
    • Learn more