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Chapter Two
"How could you three do this?" The king yelled. We all sat in wooden chairs in the royal kitchen, our heads bowed. "How could you three be so foolish!?" he yelled his chubby face red. The King was a hard man to get along with, he was chubby. His Red short curly hair looked like a mop that covered his head, he wore gold clothes all the time, he was a odd man. "Excuse me my king, but we werent being foolish, we were protecting the kingdomYou see-" "Quiet Gothica! You were not protecting the kingdom! Its more unsafe now then it was when the goblins were here!" Gothica sighed and bowed his head in defeat. I stood up, my hands clenched. "My dear King Babeth, you are simply being harsh, how could the kingdom be more unsafe now then before?" I asked. "JackieIs it? Well, Jackie, you just wouldnt understand, normal people like you three wouldnt." I looked away smiling slightly, he had no clue. "What are you three smiling about!?" The king yelled, I looked around seeing the smiles on Gothicas and Charles face. "Nothing my king!" We all sung out, then started to laugh. "ENOUGH!" yelled the king grabbing my arm. Charles shot up from his seat, followed by Gothica. "Let her go!" Charles yelled. "Charles! Calm down!" I yelled at him, I knew if his temper got to ahead of himself, his vampire side would show. "Now, my dear king, please let me go, your hurting my arm." The king looked down at my arm and loosened his grip then pulled his hand away, I backed away bumping into Gothica, Gothica let out a growl towards the king. "Be gone, the three of you, far away from the kingdom." he ordered. "Fine, be it then, you shall die a most painful death." Charles said, his fangs already starting to show. I grabbed Charles hand, "Dont mind him king! He threats everyone! Now, come!" I yelled dragging Charles out, hoping Gothica would follow.
You guys should make new ones! You know, be more immature and shit? That'll be the best and make a fool out of yourselves!!! :D good job on being fucking pricks and bullies about it! You know you can get in serious trouble for this? Making fun of people? Yeah it's called BULLYING && it is against the law to do that shit. Trust me I know. I made it happen(: So seriously try making fun of my girl again and see how fast you'll be put in jail(: get a life and stop making up stupid shit like this.
TheEmoSweetart 8 months ago
they can't make any more. she deleted them. if they make anymore or new ones she could sue them. i think lol
BlackAngelB91 8 months ago
@KiraiNelle652 are you going to make another one?? this is awesome
KiraiNelle652 9 months ago
whats happened to the guy in the bath?? is there another chapter i would like to what happens next on the vampire princess
KiraiNelle652 1 year ago
Your mother's a whore.
-Nigel T.
Alagar3000 2 years ago
What about the pillars? Also, is there any way you can speak any less coherently?
superdark 3 years ago
oh yeh don't shoot like u bilt a set if u dint> wtf? set is just table? shoot table and faces. whf you shoot like some fancy shit on walls?
joebillbobishton 3 years ago
huge fan of vamp. princess 1. u rilly fell off it hard tho. good outdor shots sometimes stil, but cmon, it cost like 20 bucks to make nocked up but they got ballsl so if urs dint drop yet scool. u want sundance? make next one about gay incest shit or emo b-stards siting liek dix not talking very much
joebillbobishton 3 years ago
i love you guys!!! dont stop making them. they always make my day.
SoHighTechnicaaalll 3 years ago 2
Its opitmos prime from transformers. I love the narrator's accent.
fob1012er 3 years ago