I think you are acting a little too childish for this part. A little ditsy & all. I think it needs to be more angry, like a lot a more angry. She's so mad that he took away her innocence. He made her just another girl. Be angry. Oh, & your pauses are a bit awkward. Just smooth the transition. Good start, but it has room for improvement.
Where did you find this monologue?
AvidActress 1 month ago
I think you are acting a little too childish for this part. A little ditsy & all. I think it needs to be more angry, like a lot a more angry. She's so mad that he took away her innocence. He made her just another girl. Be angry. Oh, & your pauses are a bit awkward. Just smooth the transition. Good start, but it has room for improvement.
shhhamber 1 year ago
Great Job! i would say to take more beats between some of the lines.
eprinco 1 year ago