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Uploaded by on Jan 21, 2010

Hello everyone.
Here's another video. As always, enjoy. Feel free to comment, rate, favorite, etc...

In some of the clips, you notice that the darkness, at the end, overpowers the video clip very similar to how darkness overpowers us sometimes. Sometimes things can seem so bright, almost as if nothing could wipe the smile off of your face, but then before you know it, youre at war with darkness. And sometimes, you grow so weak, so sick of trying to fight anymore, that you just give up, and let darkness take you.


Song Used: Why - Rascal Flatts.
Dedicated to: Anybody who has lost someone that they love, through death or through being left in the dust, after everything and of course, to my guardian angel. Youve hurt me deeply, more deeply than anyone, even me, can fathom but I still find myself saying the words I love you" and meaning it as much as I did before, if not more. And you dont even care. This isn't the person I once knew. Will the real you ever come back? Only time will tell.

That's all I can say.

To make up for the words I can't say, here's a poem. It's called Completely Broken.

I felt my pulse quicken,
like the abrupt acceleration
of a car sliding across
a sheet of
ice.
The weight of the silence
overpowered my soul and
stamped a permanent image
of every little thing,
every word uttered,
every touch, scent, and view,
in my mind.
Everything was,
and nothing wasn't,
a collision of emotions
all stacked one on top
of the other
upon my heart.
A pair of soft brown eyes
stared back at me,
seeing through to every
part of
my being.
Hands,
coming in contact
with skin.
That's when I
realize,
something is
missing,
something out
of reach,
a silver stream of
tears, glisten on
my cheeks,
the shadow of dawn
lingers on your invisible,
faceless expression,
as the soft thunder
rumbles overhead as
you turn around
and walk
away,
and right then,
I knew,
for sure,
that I was
completely broken.

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Uploader Comments (Alexagjbfan1214)

  • Okay, why are YouTube comments like Twitter now..? When you reply to someone it says @ whatever at the beginning? That's kinda stupid. I miss the old YouTube.

  • You NEVER fail to bring out emotion. On the verge of tears, I have to say that, this is amazing. You should think about being a writer when you grow up, you'd be the best at it. Remember that the darkness, though a thick shroud, is breakable with hope and the knowledge that God loves you.

  • @SingPlayMusicLife Thank you.

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  • this made me cry

    this song holds a special place in my heart because it reminds me of my cousin. He took his own life less than a year ago but he will always have a place in my heart

  • This made me cry and the song reminded of...my someone special....he passed away seven months ago :'(

  • this video & poems are unbelievable!!

    i swear when i was watching this i got goosebumps ,, you capture him soo beautifully and the songs are always so perfect you have such a gift

    thank you for uploading these its makes my day a little brighter ;)

    favorited, five out of five stars

  • I just went through something pretty dificult an hour ago... I could hardly finish the poem and both the poem and the video made me cry.

  • i loved it Alexa. Like usual of course. Im here if you need someone, don't think you can't talk to anyone. There's always friends here..promise.

    ~Lilly

  • beautiful video (:

    made me cry :(

    i know how u feel i lost my 2 baby sisters :/

  • omg..this made me cry and so did your poem T_T

    beautiful video [:

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