Hysteria | A Denied Film
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hi tehre
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its a trippy short film 5/5 make more stuff like this
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it was interesting, I would try to explore some more interesting camera angles to make the film more intense. the dialogue seemed really unrealistic, and you might want to have a couple people go over your script before you shoot. I thought it was an interesting plot line but nothing spectacular. and a note, try not to play ridiculously overplayed music in the background, it makes you look like you were lazy to find anything better. In a sense it turns this into something really cliche.
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muy bien 5/5 amigo
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That was a very quality film. I would have like to have seen a little bit more of there backgrounds, but at the same time I realize that youtube only allows video's of ten minutes. I like how you left the end slightly open. Although most would assume it was the other criminal, it is still unknown, that was good.This was a wonderfully scenic area for filming. When they were running around in the forest there were a couple things I didnt like. One was that he would have pulled the gun out earlier.
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cool
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5/5
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Awesome Video! GREAT Story! :D 5*!
This was a really good video, and I liked how you were capable and making a story without a large amount of dialogue. However, I would say that some of the action just didn't feel... real enough. Like when the one guy with the hat gets his gun for the first time and shouts at the other, it just doesn't feel very feel. It didn't feel emotional enough, b/c he just KINDA yelled.. ya know what I mean? Overall though, I liked it very much. :D
PeculiarProductions4 3 years ago
Thanks i really appreciate your feedback it helps alot :)
plus i agree, that was me, and im definatley not the best actor, i prefer directing/editing
thanks!
gnarly6154 3 years ago
nice. are you films shot in Ireland?
joshXtoob 3 years ago
thanks for comment, this one was, but some of the others are USA because I have relatives there whom I film with.
gnarly6154 3 years ago
Ahhh I like :D soooo good! Film Studies? I've got to make a film for that! haha xx
galloper134 3 years ago 8
haha actually no just for fun, I wish i was taking a film course but not much offered at my high school. thanks for the comment!
gnarly6154 3 years ago